In short: The comment places on the record specific economic data regarding Washington's outdoor recreation industry and the Forest Service's road maintenance backlog, along with the commenter's personal reliance on specific roadless areas in the Gifford Pinchot and Okanogan-Wenatchee National Forests, to argue that rescinding the 2001 Roadless Rule would cause economic harm and fail to address actual wildfire mitigation needs.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “outdoor enthusiast who spends significant time”
- “quiet, roadless country you can't manufacture back”
- “hikers, climbers, hunters, and anglers”
- “degrade the very backcountry character that draws that spending”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “threatens real economic harm to the towns, cities, and state economies”
- “Outdoor recreation contributes roughly $26.5 billion annually”
- “trading a short-term timber yield for a long-term hit to tourism-dependent local economies”
- “saves taxpayers money: the Forest Service already carries a nearly $6 billion road maintenance backlog”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “protecting one of the last stretches of old-growth forest”
- “buffers the wilderness from the industrial development”
- “opening these roadless areas to logging and road construction”
- “pristine backcountry to new roads and logging”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “inventoried roadless areas... accounting for only a small share of wildfire starts”
- “roads themselves are one of the biggest drivers of human-caused ignitions”
- “doesn't address the workforce and funding shortfalls”
- “opens pristine backcountry to new roads and logging under the banner of fire policy”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Evidence