In short: The comment documents that the agency's rescission proposal is internally inconsistent with its own scientific data on fire ignition in roadless areas, fails to properly assess the economic impact on local small entities despite acknowledging millions in lost recreation benefits, and ignores solicited reliance interests, specifically regarding the Arroyo Seco, Strawberry Peak, and San Gabriel Add roadless areas in the Angeles National Forest.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “hike frequently in this area”
- “pristine views of the San Gabriel Mountains”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “scenic trails and rugged slopes that draw visitors”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “ignitions are almost twice as likely to occur in roaded areas”
- “Opening these landscapes to roads would bring exactly the ignition risk”
- “allows tree cutting in non-upper tier within 0.5 miles”
- “temporary road may be constructed to facilitate hazardous fuel reduction”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “unspoiled, rugged slopes would be fundamentally altered by roads”
- “genuinely wild region of forest where the city disappears entirely”
- “destroy the unique wilderness character of these areas”
- “conserved adjacent land and understood these landscapes as protected”
- Governance Policy Process
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition density data in its own DEIS”
- “quantify those burdens with evidence rather than assertion”
- “withdraw that certification and conduct a meaningful assessment”
- “genuinely weigh the reliance interests submitted in this comment period”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence