In short: The comment establishes that the proposed rescission's reliance on 'local control' is undermined by the precedent of the Caribou-Targhee National Forest overriding state and local objections for the Grand Targhee Resort expansion, and that the projected economic benefits are negligible compared to the Forest Service's $8.6 billion maintenance backlog, while also documenting the commenter's 20-year residency in northwest Wyoming as a basis for standing.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Governance Policy Process
- “doesn't hold up against recent record”
- “federal appointees tied to the same partisan leadership”
- “require that any decision overriding a state agency's science-based objection... get elevated review”
- “not a Forest Supervisor's sign-off alone”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “last intact habitat strongholds”
- “habitat for the isolated Teton Range bighorn sheep herd”
- “federally threatened whitebark pine”
- “degrade forage for wildlife and livestock alike”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “USDA's own analysis projects $4.6–10.6 million a year in added timber revenue”
- “deferred maintenance backlog exceeded $8.6 billion”
- “roughly 0.12% of that backlog”
- “risk to 44.7 million acres... for a rounding error”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Fire is a natural cycle here”
- “bark beetle is minor compared to the damage from invasive annual grasses”
- “spread largely by the very activities this rule expands”
- “invasive species accountability needs to be a first-order priority”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal