In short: The comment places on the record specific data from the agency's DEIS (Table 21, grizzly bear recovery plan, and Cost Benefit Analysis) to demonstrate that the proposed rescission contradicts the agency's own findings on fire ignition risks, administrative burdens, and economic impacts, while failing to address the specific reliance interests in Utah's roadless areas that the agency solicited.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Undeveloped land is where I go to feel in touch with nature”
- “I hike and camp in places like Mineral Canyon and Bear Valley Peak”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The wildfire rationale the agency offers does not survive contact with its own data”
- “roads allow more agile positioning of firefighting assets, they are also the site of high rates of human-caused ignition”
- “Opening roadless areas... would bring exactly that ignition risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with those ignition figures in its own record”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “concern about what new roads do to wildlife”
- “increased contact and conflict in grizzly habitat from open roads can ultimately end in grizzly mortality”
- “shooting, habituation, and food reward all increase with use of even secondary unpaved roads”
- “Bear Valley Peak offers a range of plants that is a pleasure to see”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency must identify, specifically and quantitatively, which burdens remain unaddressed”
- “The agency should withdraw that certification and assess the firms actually operating”
- “The agency invited reliance interests and then ignored them”
- “The agency must identify and weigh the interests described in the comments”
What it names
- National Forests
- Dixie National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Bear Valley PeakMineral Canyon
- Works cited
- Narayanaraj and Wimberly 2012U 1993
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence