In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to disclose that for specific ESA-listed species (Lassics lupine, big sandy crayfish, Big Creek crayfish, and Sonora chub), the underlying land management plans predate their listings and lack species-specific protections, rendering the DEIS's reliance on plan consistency for avoiding adverse effects incomplete and unsupported by the agency's own Biological Assessment.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “pristine wildlife habitats”
- “ESA-listed species”
- “adverse critical habitat determinations”
- “species-specific protections”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “integrity and protection of our inventoried roadless areas”
- “unfragmented landscapes”
- “maintain full protections for all currently designated inventoried roadless areas”
- “loss of an administrative protection”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “DEIS Relies on Land Management Plan Consistency”
- “premise the agency's own Biological Assessment records as false”
- “plan-level fact”
- “disclosure therefore has to occur in this document”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “avid user and advocate for our nation's public lands”
- “frequently visit the Linville Gorge”
- “natural resources and tourism”