In short: The comment documents that the draft EIS fails to demonstrate a net reduction in wildfire risk from rescission, cites specific data on roadless acreage in the Mark Twain National Forest and biological impacts on 327 species, and requests the retention of 36 CFR part 294, subpart B.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “adversely affect 327 federally listed species”
- “Roads fragment habitat, disrupt wildlife movement”
- “spread invasive species”
- “intact habitat is far harder AND more expensive to restore”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “USDA's wildfire rationale is unpersuasive”
- “human-caused fires generally increase with proximity to roads”
- “does not show that nationwide rescission would produce a net reduction in wildfire risk”
- “Roads bring vehicles, equipment, campfires, sparks”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “carry sediment into streams supporting fish and drinking-water supplies”
- “value clean water, fisheries”
- “threats to... water quality”
- “full public cost of rescission... value clean water”
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “most Tribal governments consulted oppose rescission”
- “threats to treaty-reserved resources, subsistence, sacred places”
- “complete meaningful government-to-government consultation”
- “sovereign concerns cannot be deferred”
Attachments
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The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal