In short: The comment places on the record specific scientific data from the NCSSF Project C10.4 report and the DEIS regarding the loss of old-growth forests, the impact of roads on wildlife and sediment, and requests that the agency quantify these losses and explain how rescission is consistent with its own findings.
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Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
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Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “loss of LSOG and biological legacies such as snags and coarse woody debris”
- “all remaining old growth and late successional forest on public lands in the region requires protection”
- “bird richness declines with road presence in forested habitat”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “concerned about species still in recovery here, particularly gray wolves and martens”
- “marten populations decline when forest cover thins”
- “road-noise experiments in a roadless area cut bird abundance by over a quarter”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Water quality is particularly important for people and for fauna in the Upper Peninsula”
- “Roadbuilding increases sediment flow into tributary streams”
- “sedimentation from harvest can promote excessive substrate movement, causing egg and juvenile mortality”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I frequently walk, bird, botanize, and watch wildlife in this area”
- “important for local recreation (the North Country Trail is contiguous to it)”
What it names
- National Forests
- Ottawa National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Norwich Plains Revised Roadless AreaWhite Pine
Attachments
2 files. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal