In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposed rescission contradicts its own DEIS findings regarding increased fire risk, fails to demonstrate a net economic benefit, ignores prior judicial findings on state-by-state alternatives, and lacks a legal basis under the Organic Act and MUSYA to override the 2001 Roadless Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “find wildlife, all wildlife”
- “grizzly bear recovery plan”
- “increased contact and conflict in roaded habitat can end in grizzly mortality”
- “flora and fauna that live there”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening that landscape to roads does not reduce fire risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS Table 21”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent of total United States production”
- “timber revenue to the Forest Service of $5.2 to $11.4 million a year against recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “road maintenance backlog already standing at $6.9 billion”
- “action whose own analysis cannot establish a net benefit”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Ninth Circuit found it deficient”
- “Tenth Circuit held... REVERSE the district court's order”
- “legal basis for any position that contradicts that holding”
- “rejection of the Roadless Rule's 'inflexible one-size-fits-all nationwide rulemaking approach'”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Bear CanyonBear MountainBlack ButteChalk PeakSanta Cruz
- Law cited
- 28 U.S.C. Section 1291
- Works cited
- U 1993
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence