In short: The comment places on the record specific statistical evidence and a cited scientific study demonstrating that road density correlates with increased wildfire ignition risk and decreased elk habitat effectiveness, thereby documenting that the agency's proposed rescission of the Roadless Rule is contradicted by available data regarding wildfire and wildlife impacts.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Roadless areas are essential wildlife habitat”
- “Elk habitat effectiveness declines roughly 25% once road density reaches one mile per square mile”
- “security cover, connectivity, and undisturbed watersheds that big game and native trout depend on”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The agency's wildfire rationale is contradicted by the evidence”
- “wildfires are roughly four times more likely to start in roaded areas than roadless tracts”
- “Expanding roads into roadless areas would predictably increase ignition risk”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “genuine solitude”
- “I hunt and fish these landscapes myself”
- “Roadless National Forest lands are among the last places left for that kind of experience”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “protect drinking water for 60 million Americans”
- “undisturbed watersheds that big game and native trout depend on”
- “once roaded, they do not return within any timeframe that matters to the... watersheds”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal