In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding the lack of projections for big game population effects and habitat fragmentation across the 40.1 million acres of affected environment, while citing specific local areas in Washington State and requesting reconciliation of the proposal with the agency's own data on wildfire ignition, sediment production, and economic costs.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “prime habitat for these animals”
- “reduce wildlife habitat, affect migration corridors”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “oppose any action that would reduce water quality”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- “tributaries flow from wilderness areas”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “wild places I work, hunt, and hike in”
- “value it for its remoteness and beauty”
- “Public land should be managed for public use”
- “Recreation, hunting, clean water, and habitat health should be the priority”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “More roads would just provide another vector for a large fire to start”
- “Little Giant Fire burned over 150,000 acres”
- “Exemptions already exist for wildland firefighters”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal