In short: The comment places on the record specific data regarding municipal water intakes and road-generated sediment, cites Tenth Circuit precedent affirming the 2001 Rule's validity, and requests the agency to quantify the increased risk of human-caused wildfires and explain how road construction in the Wasatch-Cache National Forest aligns with its own findings on water quality and fire safety.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “depends on winter snowpack for its water supply”
- “Without tree cover, any water we get will be unclean”
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land”
- “Adding ignition risk through new roads is the wrong direction”
- “The land will become a tinderbox prone to slides and flooding”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Tenth Circuit stated: 'Exercising jurisdiction pursuant to 28 U.S.C. Section 1291, we REVERSE'”
- “The agency should address that holding squarely”
- “The rule as written already includes exceptions”
- “A vague assertion of burden is not a sufficient basis for rescinding a rule”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Tony Grove and the surrounding old growth forest... is a place where people in this community celebrate special occasions”
- “Newly married couples have their pictures taken there”
- “Families spread the ashes of loved ones there”
- “To lose these forests... would be a wound to our hearts”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal