In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposed rescission of the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule contradicts its own 2020 study and other cited data indicating that fire risks are equal inside and outside roadless areas and that human-caused ignitions are more frequent near roads, thereby documenting a specific analytical deficiency in the agency's 'Wildfire Risk' assessment.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “vehemently and unequivocally opposed to the rescission”
- “contradicts its own analysis and studies on the subject”
- “fire risks are approximately equal inside and outside of roadless areas”
- “fires are four times more likely to start within 50 meters of roads”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “surrounded by the most pristine wilderness in the lower 48”
- “Recreating in these areas... has been my pursuit of happiness”
- “It is where I have gone during times where I had nothing left to live for”
- “a few good quiet places left upon this earth to rest in”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “2020 study titled “Long-Term Forest Health Implication of Roadlessness””
- “report “Three-decade record of contiguous-U.S. national forest wildfires””
- “blatantly ignoring widely accepted and respected data”
- “request to know why... the agency is departing from those prior findings”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: EvidenceRequest