In short: The comment establishes that the agency's draft environmental impact statement contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition rates and fire density, that the existing rule already permits the hazardous fuel reduction measures cited as justification for rescission, that the regulatory flexibility analysis improperly averages national data rather than assessing local small entities, and that the agency failed to weigh the reliance interests it solicited, specifically documenting the commenter's reliance on the rule for predictable access to Bunker Creek and Hancock.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The agency frames this proposal in part as a wildfire management measure, but its own draft environmental impact statement undermines that framing”
- “The DEIS also reports far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- “The rule already permits the hazardous fuel work the agency says justifies rescission”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “The streams I walk in Bunker Creek clean water for surrounding populations”
- “A road there, as the agency's own water intake data suggests, would put that function at risk”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “My husband, two college friends, and I have hiked through beautiful rock formations in the roadless areas of Utah for many years”
- “The DEIS names outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “My group has returned to these areas across many trips precisely because the rule's protections made that future predictable”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The agency's regulatory flexibility analysis does not hold together”
- “The agency must withdraw the small-entity certification and assess the impact on the operators actually working in these areas”
- “Under controlling precedent, an agency reversing course must genuinely assess the reliance its prior policy created”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Bunker Creek
- Works cited
- Narayanaraj and Wimberly 2012
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal