In short: The comment establishes that the commenter resides in Flagstaff, AZ, within the Coconino National Forest, and documents specific local and regional impacts of the proposed rescission on wildfire risk, wildlife habitat, water quality, and tribal rights in that location.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Roadless areas provide habitat for an estimated 60% of the nation's vulnerable wildlife”
- “put more than 300 protected species at risk: grizzly bears, Canada lynx, wolverines, spotted owls, and native fish”
- “Roads are a huge barrier to habitat, and disrupt migration corridors”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “The protected areas supply drinking water to 20–25 million people”
- “Road construction and logging are major drivers of sediment and chemical runoff in headwater streams”
- “risks degrading water quality at the source for millions of downstream communities”
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “Tribal nations have clearly and consistently opposed this rescission”
- “Roadless areas often overlap with lands of deep cultural, spiritual, and subsistence significance”
- “The National Congress of American Indians passed a resolution supporting retention of the rule”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfires are ~four times more likely to ignite in areas with roads than in roadless forest”
- “Opening these areas to roads will likely increase the number of human-caused ignitions”
- “The current Roadless Rule already permits road construction for public health and safety needs”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal