In short: The comment places on the record specific data from the DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis demonstrating that roads increase wildfire risk and that the economic benefits of rescission are uncertain, while citing Tenth Circuit precedent to challenge the agency's legal authority to rescind the rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “sediment, chemicals, and trash from nearby roads trash the water”
- “clean and abundant water it provides as a major tributary to the Animas River”
- “325 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “survived the 416 fire remarkably well because of fire mitigation work”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “roads raise fire risk rather than reduce it”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “That argument did not survive judicial review the last time the agency pursued it”
- “found the rule within the authority Congress granted under the Organic Act”
- “agency must explain how this proposal avoids the specific deficiencies identified by the Ninth Circuit”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Hunting and fishing and climbing in Colorado's national forests are not abstractions”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “fish and backpack and climb”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapLegal