In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule is inconsistent with its own DEIS findings regarding wildfire ignition rates on roaded lands, its cost-benefit analysis showing no clear net economic benefit, and its own data on bird abundance declines, while noting that existing regulatory exceptions already address public safety and water protection needs in specific locations like Coconino and Kaibab National Forests.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “bird abundance dropped by over a quarter”
- “31 percent of species avoided the noise entirely”
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “old growth tree stands in these canyons”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building roads through National Forests will exacerbate the already-worsening fire seasons”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent of total United States production”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “$6.9 billion road maintenance backlog”
- “economic projections that the agency's own numbers cannot validate”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “739 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “watershed protection”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Coconino RimEast Clear CreekJacks CanyonLeonard CanyonLower Jacks CanyonPadre CanyonPonderosa Pine
- Law cited
- 36 C.F.R. Section 294.12
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal