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In short: The comment places on the record that the draft environmental impact statement incorrectly claims rescinding the Roadless Rule solves the wildfire crisis, contradicting Forest Service data on human-caused fires and road proximity risks, while asserting that rescission violates constitutional and trust obligations to Tribes who depend on the Tongass for cultural and subsistence survival.
Scored as the letter — The shared letter of a family, scored once for everyone who sent it.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “violate Tribal sovereignty and therefore the U.S. Constitution”
- “legal obligations to Tribes, including engaging in early and meaningful government-to-government consultation”
- “without any prior consultation with our Tribe or other Southeast Alaska tribes”
- “honor your constitutional, trust, and treaty obligations to Tribes”
- Cultural Heritage Indigenous
- “crucial to Native Tribes' spirituality, culture, identity, and survival”
- “The Tongass is more than an ecosystem -- it is our home. It is the foundation of our identity, our culture, and our way of life”
- “helping to protect customary and traditional uses of our lands and waters”
- “This helps us honor our ancestors and provide for current and future generations”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “provide clean drinking water for more than 60 million U.S. residents”
- “provides shade for our streams to keep them cool so our salmon can return year after year”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “crucial ecosystems for the wildlife that Tribal Nations depend on”
- “providing shelter, the berries, and our medicines”
- “hunts deer and moose, which are rebounding after past clear-cut logging”
- “protect... the fish, wildlife, trees and plants”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal