In short: The comment places on the record specific economic data showing a negative net present value for the proposed action, cites DEIS findings on increased road maintenance costs and sedimentation impacts on water quality, and documents the commenter's personal use of the roadless lands for recreation.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “Marten disappear when forest cover thins; wolverine avoid roads”
- “grizzly bear have suffered habitat loss and the extirpation or fragmentation of their populations”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “24 million people use water that originates inside the roadless areas”
- “skid roads, trails and log landings... are the main cause of soil erosion”
- “contribute up to 90 percent of the sediment generated by timber sale activity”
- “costs to health and increased costs of water cleaning”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “thousands go for quiet country, for solace, for fishing and for hunting”
- “no-action alternative maintains the most opportunities for quiet, remote and self-reliant recreation”
- “rescission alternative has the greatest potential for negative effects to scenery”
- “lost recreation benefit”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “net present value that runs to negative $92 million”
- “road mileage, deferred maintenance and management costs are likely to increase”
- “maximum projected timber revenue is $5.2 to 11.4 million a year”
- “Road appropriations fell from $234 million in 2004 to $73 million in 2024”
What it names
- Works cited
- Haddad et al. 2015Kroeger et al. 2022
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal