Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “object to the agency's primary assertion... that a total rescission... is required to protect communities from rising wildfire risks”
- “expanding the road network... will drastically increase human-caused wildfire ignitions”
- “facilitating new road construction for timber extraction... building 'ignition corridors'”
- “local forest managers already possess explicit authority to cut, thin, or remove timber... and conduct prescribed burns”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “According to the agency's own historical data, roughly 90% of wildland fires are caused by human activity”
- “Independent research has also shown that wildfire ignitions are up to four times more likely to occur in close proximity to roads”
- “what specific empirical evidence or scientific modeling did the Forest Service rely upon”
- “The DEIS fails to adequately evaluate”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Under the existing framework (36 CFR § 294.12 and § 294.13)”
- “local forest managers already possess explicit authority”
- “The agency's rationale that the 2001 Roadless Rule acts as a barrier... is factually incorrect”
- “The Forest Service has not demonstrated that the current exceptions are insufficient”