In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS fails to connect baseline habitat data to the specific impacts of road construction under Alternatives 2 and 3, lacks quantification of new road maintenance costs against the existing $6.9 billion backlog, and ignores evidence that roadless areas have lower wildfire ignition densities, thereby supporting the retention of Alternative 1.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “provide essential wildlife habitat”
- “fragment habitat and cause lasting damage to wildlife”
- “habitat for more than 300 threatened, endangered, and proposed species”
- “measurable habitat degradation extending up to five kilometers from roads”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “protect watersheds”
- “drain directly into Lake Tahoe, an irreplaceable national resource”
- “cause lasting damage to... water quality”
- “sedimentation under Alternatives 2 and 3”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “claim that rescinding the Roadless Rule is necessary for wildfire or fuels management is also unsupported”
- “current rule already allows fuels management in certain circumstances”
- “wildfire ignition density is lower in designated wilderness and potentially affected roadless areas”
- “increased road access could increase the number and frequency of human-caused ignitions”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “required under Robertson v. Methow Valley Citizens Council”
- “Administrative Procedure Act, 5 U.S.C. § 706(2)(A)”
- “The DEIS should address this research and provide species-specific or habitat-guild-level analysis”
- “The agency should cite the source for its ignition-density comparison”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest