In short: The comment documents specific economic, ecological, and safety deficiencies in the proposed rescission of the Roadless Rule, citing agency DEIS data on recreation losses, scientific studies on wildlife and wildfire risks, and watershed impacts to argue for maintaining current protections.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “backpacked and hiked in many of our nation's roadless national forests”
- “minimum of $6.1 million in annual losses to recreationists”
- “quiet, remote and self-reliant recreation”
- “Local guides, outfitters, and communities depend heavily”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “fragmentation from road building threatens population viability”
- “critical habitat ranges for over 400 imperiled animal and plant species”
- “irreplaceable contiguous migration corridors for large mammals”
- “unroaded forests maintain significantly higher biodiversity”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “protects the clean drinking water supply for 25 million Americans”
- “degrade pristine watersheds that feed major municipal systems”
- “critical salmon-bearing rivers of Oregon and Washington”
- “forcing municipal water utilities to pass expensive filtration and treatment costs”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfires are four times more likely to start in areas served by roads”
- “90% of all wildfires on national forests starting within a half-mile of a road”
- “Introducing new roads... will drastically increase human-caused wildfire risks”
- “14 wilderness firefighters have lost their lives fighting forest fires”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal