In short: The comment establishes that the Draft Environmental Impact Statement (DEIS) materially misrepresents the 2020 Alaska FEIS by deleting specific protective grounds (LUDs and T77/Conservation Priority Area prohibitions) and altering the scope of the 'minimal effects' conclusion, while also failing to adequately disclose Clean Water Act Section 404 impacts for the Suntop IRA.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Clean Water Act Section 404 Deficiencies”
- “DEIS Materially Alters the 2020 Alaska FEIS Fish Habitat Finding”
- “fails NEPA's hard-look requirement”
- “The 2001 Roadless Rule has withstood a quarter-century of litigation”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “jurisdictional waters of the United States”
- “quantify fill discharges at each potential crossing”
- “changes watershed protection status”
- “management-caused sediment input to streams”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “effects to fish habitat”
- “high-value salmon watersheds”
- “T77 watersheds and TNC/Audubon Conservation Priority Areas”
- “protective differences among alternatives for these waters”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “professional photography guide”
- “taking paying clients into backcountry”
- “shared that peace with clients”
- “Once a road goes in, that character is lost for generations”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal