In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule is inconsistent with its own DEIS findings regarding wildfire risk on roaded lands, fails to reconcile the economic costs of road maintenance with projected benefits, and violates NEPA by dismissing protective alternatives based on deregulatory mandates rather than environmental analysis, specifically impacting the San Miguel and Dolores River watersheds in Colorado.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Alternative.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Roads change hydrology, increase erosion, and degrade the water quality”
- “325 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “paddlers and downstream communities depend on”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Adding more roads to a region already experiencing these fires poses a much larger risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS”
- Governance Policy Process
- “Alternatives with more protection were dismissed as not responsive to the deregulatory executive orders”
- “A purpose written as deregulation forecloses the comparison NEPA requires”
- “The agency must restate the purpose and need in terms of actual forest conditions”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The agency is already $6.9 billion behind on maintaining the roads it has”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “net present value spanning -$92 million to +$199 million”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Rocky MountainSan Miguel
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal