In short: The comment establishes that the agency's DEIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition risks, elk survival rates, and habitat fragmentation impacts that have not been reconciled, and documents the commenter's specific reliance interests in the 2001 Roadless Rule for hunting, hiking, and fishing in unroaded Western National Forests.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “risk of ignition is about 5 times greater next to a road”
- “Opening roadless areas to road construction does not reduce ignition risk. It multiplies it.”
- “reconcile increased risk of wildfire by allowing increased road construction”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “elk and other animals move and survive”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure and decreased when the gates were removed”
- “elk avoid roads and select unroaded habitat”
- “project the effects of the proposed rescission on big game populations”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “adverse impacts to biodiversity based on their own findings”
- “apply the cited fragmentation range to the full 40.1 million acres”
- “intact habitat holds more of what makes wild country worth going to”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Enjoying nature, hiking, backpacking and occasionally hunting and fishing”
- “hike and climb away from the sound or sign of motorized travel”
- “fishing without motorized travel”
- “hunting, for hiking and backpacking in National Forests across the West”
What it names
- Works cited
- Narayanaraj and Wimberly 2012
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal