In short: The comment documents that the agency's draft EIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire risk and road density, that the regulatory flexibility analysis improperly averages economic losses across the national sector rather than assessing specific local small entities, and that the rescission ignores documented reliance interests in the stability of the 2001 Roadless Rule for local trail management and water quality protection in Cache County.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “quiet, photograph clear mountain streams and high ridgelines with no visible sign of human impact”
- “I have been hiking in and around Mt. Logan South... for almost 8 years”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “It makes sense to allow different areas to serve different recreation and access needs”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “The water quality in that marsh begins in these roadless areas”
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “fed by the Logan River and the Blacksmith Fork River, both of which have their headwaters in Cache National Forest”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “where wild animals still gather and thrive away from modern development and machines”
- “I have seen all kinds of wildlife who still call this yet unfragmented place home”
- “less diversity in the animals you are likely to see”
- Governance Policy Process
- “I ask that the agency reconcile this contradiction”
- “I ask that the agency withdraw that certification and assess impacts on the specific small entities”
- “The proposal overstates what the rule prohibits”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest