In short: The comment establishes that the agency's alternatives analysis is circular by eliminating protective options based on a deregulation-centered purpose, fails to quantify the degradation of primitive recreation settings and associated economic impacts using data from Table 41, and relies on land management plans that were explicitly acknowledged as lacking specific direction for inventoried roadless areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Alternative.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Governance Policy Process
- “alternatives analysis is built on a circular foundation”
- “purpose and need statement was written to require deregulation”
- “defines away every middle-ground option before analysis begins”
- “plan-reliance rationale that anchors alternatives 2 and 3 is also unsupported”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I camp and hike with my dog”
- “quiet, wildlife-rich camping I value in the Coronado”
- “primitive, semi-primitive non-motorized, or semi-primitive motorized recreation settings”
- “risk of degrading the recreation settings that produce those visits”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “loss of wildlife, waters, and biodiversity”
- “wildflowers, birds, and deer around my campsite”
- “forests and lands, once destroyed, cannot be resurrected”
- “natural circle of life which we humans are a part of”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “rescission should not be finalized before those updates are either in place or secured by a binding completion schedule”
- “final EIS should identify which specific plan amendments or revisions would be required”
- “alternative that considered maintaining existing inventoried roadless area boundaries”
- “not being responsive to the purpose and need”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapRequestAlternative