In short: The comment places on the record that the agency's own economic analysis fails to demonstrate a net benefit for the rescission, that the proposal threatens 1,522 municipal water intakes and wildlife in the Umpqua and Siuslaw National Forests, and that the agency has not addressed the legal precedents from the Tenth and Ninth Circuits regarding the validity of the 2001 Roadless Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “water I drink every day begins in these affected watersheds”
- “do not want water treatment costs to rise”
- “direct threat to the watershed quality that municipal intakes and aquatic species depend on”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes lie in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “wildlife in the Hardesty Mountain wilderness area currently has room to live as it should”
- “wildlife that depend on these watersheds for their lives matter too”
- “roads are precisely the threat the rule was designed to hold back”
- “aquatic species depend on”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “agency's own numbers undercut the economic rationale”
- “net present value ranging from -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “road maintenance backlog already standing at $6.9 billion”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Tenth Circuit has already spoken”
- “held the 2001 rule fell within the authority Congress granted”
- “Ninth Circuit found that prior state-by-state substitution inadequate”
- “administrative burden argument does not survive contact with the rule's own text”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal