In short: The comment establishes that the commenter, a resident of Missoula, Montana and river guide, has direct personal and professional standing in specific roadless watersheds, and documents that the agency's proposed rescission of the Roadless Rule conflicts with its own Draft EIS findings regarding wildfire risk, water quality, wildlife habitat, and economic impacts in Montana.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “threaten... big game and fish habitat”
- “93% of elk summer range in Montana is found within roadless areas”
- “79% of roadless areas in Montana are home to native trout”
- “secure habitat during hunting season”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “threaten drinking water supplies”
- “water quality degradation from increased sediment and pollutants”
- “altered stream channels, fragmented habitat, and migration barriers”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “hunting, angling, paddling, and other outdoor recreation opportunities”
- “Montana's $3.4 billion outdoor recreation industry supports tens of thousands of jobs”
- “intact, roadless landscapes that draw visitors from across the country”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “new roads have been shown to increase human-triggered wildfires”
- “current Roadless Rule already allows exceptions for wildfire treatments”
- “188,393 acres of hazardous fuels treatments conducted in roadless areas”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- North Fork SmithRock CreekRocky MountainSouth Fork
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative