In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule conflicts with its own DEIS findings regarding wildfire ignition rates and elk survival, fails to analyze population-level effects on big game or hydrological impacts on specific watersheds in the Manti-La Sal, Superior, Monongahela, George Washington, and Chequamegon-Nicolet National Forests, and does not justify rescission by quantifying administrative burdens not already addressed by existing regulatory exceptions.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Elk are present there in part because of that absence”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure and decreased when the gates were removed”
- “The Hellbender salamander depends on pristine water quality and is at particular risk from road-induced sedimentation”
- “offer solitude and wildlife experience that are genuinely hard to find”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “watched what happens to water quality when a road enters a watershed”
- “sedimentation goes up, and during large precipitation events the runoff can be significant”
- “Those unlogged ridges and intact soils are filtering some of the cleanest freshwater”
- “protect headwaters that feed the Potomac”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “sought that country precisely because of the absence of roads and vehicles”
- “allows hikers and backpack campers like me to move through primary forest in non-motorized solitude”
- “My son and I go into those forests specifically looking for reptiles and amphibians”
- “How does the agency intend to maintain non-motorized user experiences”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Opening it to roads would most likely mean less elk and more wildfire”
- “A human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “The proposal justifies rescission partly on wildfire and fuels management grounds”
- “reconcile this proposal with the ignition data in its own DEIS”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal