Small family — One letter sent by 3 to 9 people, copied or lightly reworded. One of 7 submissions in its group; the sender added words of their own. See the letter, its submissions and topics.
Carries the letter's score — A copy of a family's letter; it holds the score and answerability level of the letter it sent.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered. This rating is the one its shared letter earned.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “concerned about the claim that removing the Roadless Rule is necessary to reduce wildfire risk”
- “96.2% of fires start within 800 meters of a road”
- “Effective fire management should prioritize strategic, science-based, site-specific treatments”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “concerned about wildlife habitat and connectivity”
- “sensitive/endangered/threatened species”
- “cumulative loss and fragmentation of roadless landscapes”
- Governance Policy Process
- “failure of local forest planning processes to maintain ecological, cultural, and public values”
- “Returning these decisions to wholly local planning processes should not be treated as a substitute”
- “individual decisions may fail to account for the cumulative loss”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “clean water”
- “soil erosion”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Glass MountainLaurel McgeeRock CreekSan Joaquin