In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis contain internal contradictions regarding wildfire risk, wildlife mortality, and economic net benefits that the commenter requests be reconciled in the administrative record, specifically citing DEIS Table 21 and specific statistical findings on bird abundance and fire likelihood.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “bald eagles and Sandhill Cranes”
- “grizzly bear is the other species I think about”
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “Verified species of the Custer Gallatin include grizzly bear, wolverine, elk, and bighorn sheep”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfire rationale offered for rescission is contradicted”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “proposal leans on fuels management to justify opening these areas to roads”
- “explain in the record why rescission advances fire safety rather than undermining it”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent”
- “Cost Benefit Analysis that cannot establish a net benefit”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “road system this proposal would expand already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “genuine draw for people who travel to watch wildlife”
- “Wildlife watching and photography support real businesses”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “lost recreation benefit at a floor of $6.1 million a year”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest