In short: The comment documents that the proposed rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule contradicts the agency's own DEIS data regarding wildfire ignition densities and sediment production, fails to properly assess reliance interests and small entity impacts, and threatens specific watersheds and recreation areas in Southern California.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “ignition density of 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “A road does not, and neither does a forest burned more frequently because a road made it accessible”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “I drink water that comes directly from Southern California rivers and aquifers”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “fewer than 12 percent of the watersheds fed by roadless areas have impaired streams today”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I go for the quiet, the dark starry skies, and the chance to be active in nature”
- “lost recreation benefit of at minimum $6.1 million a year”
- “Outfitters, guides, and tour operators who hold permits in the affected areas depend on the conditions the Roadless Rule maintains”
- Governance Policy Process
- “bypasses the public process that created the rule”
- “The Forest Service held more than 600 public meetings and received 1.6 million comments to write this rule. It has held none to undo it.”
- “An agency changing course is required to assess the reliance its prior policy created”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest