In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding small business impacts, reliance interests, wildfire ignition density, and sediment delivery to municipal water intakes, citing specific data from the DEIS and requesting quantification of these impacts.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Hiking and camping in roadless areas”
- “places I love to paddle”
- “navigating into the wilderness without the convenience of destructive roads”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “improved water and air quality”
- “supplies roughly 60 percent of Bend's municipal drinking water”
- “main cause of soil erosion”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the municipal intakes”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “world with more wildlife and biodiversity”
- “federally threatened bull trout, Oregon spotted frog, northern spotted owl”
- “habitat a surge in human-caused fire could degrade”
- “old-growth forest”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “small-business analysis cannot be squared with its own cost figures”
- “withdraw the certification and conduct a genuine assessment”
- “declined to weigh them”
- “identify and weigh the reliance interests”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Green MountainLookout Mountain
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest