In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS cites specific findings on habitat fragmentation, elk survival, and carbon storage but fails to project these effects across the 40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment, and requests that the agency quantify these impacts and identify unresolved administrative burdens before finalizing the rescission.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Southern Appalachians are among the most biodiverse temperate forests”
- “sheltering salamander species found nowhere else on Earth”
- “Mushrooms and moths depend on intact forest structure”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “climate consequences of rescission are stated and then dropped”
- “inventoried roadless areas contain about 5 percent of the stored forest carbon”
- “roughly 0.9 billion metric tons”
- “quantify the projected change in carbon storage and sequestration”
- Governance Policy Process
- “agency's justifications do not hold up against its own record”
- “agency has not shown what burden remains”
- “A finding about survival rates is not analysis”
- “process that cites its own findings and walks away from them”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “headwaters those forests protect flow to both the Atlantic and the Gulf”
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The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest