In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Rule is inconsistent with its own data regarding road-generated sediment loads in water-stressed watersheds, increased human-caused fire ignition risks on roaded lands, and the legal validity of the 2001 rule as affirmed by the Tenth Circuit, while highlighting the lack of public engagement for the rescission process.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “global water bankruptcy”
- “introduce more toxins into natural waterways and groundwater stores”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- “1,034 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “roads multiply human-caused ignition risk”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- “cannot justify opening roadless areas to road construction on fire safety grounds”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “untouched, undeveloped land”
- “recreate without worry of deforestation, pollution, or mining”
- “keeping tourism and recreation dollars inside our own economy”
- “nearest places I can stand on ground that has not been carved up”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Tenth Circuit found the rule was within the authority Congress granted”
- “litigated, and it failed”
- “legal basis for any position to the contrary”
- “REVERSE the district court's order”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest