In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the Draft EIS regarding wildfire and economic analysis, cites the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule, and requests the Forest Service select the No Action alternative based on impacts to Utah's roadless areas and public comment process inadequacies.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The agency's own analysis does not support the wildfire argument”
- “Wildfire ignitions increase as road density increases”
- “The current rule already allows thinning, and even road building, to reduce wildfire risk”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Roadless areas protect drinking water”
- “Road building and logging in source watersheds degrade water quality”
- “raise filtration costs for the people downstream”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Recreation supports far more of the economy than logging”
- “Hunting, fishing, hiking, biking and skiing do not need new roads”
- “they lose value when backcountry is roaded and logged”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The process is inadequate”
- “This rescission allows a short comment period and holds no public hearings”
- “A rule built with that much public input should not be undone with this little”
Attachments
1 file. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal