In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule contradicts its own findings on wildfire ignition rates and sediment loading, fails to account for specific local reliance interests and economic impacts in the Bridger-Teton and Shoshone forests, and lacks a reasoned explanation for how expanding a road system with a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog serves the public interest.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “pronghorn running the longest land migration in North America funnel through here”
- “Grizzly bear, gray wolf, cutthroat trout, trumpeter swan, and sage grouse live in this forest”
- “To see it unprotected is to see it destroyed”
- “habitat of every creature around me at risk”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “I drink well water from this land”
- “Removing these protections could contaminate it and the water around me”
- “325 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “prevent sediment loading in the watersheds feeding wells and streams”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “More roads mean more fires, and more fires put my home, my livelihood, and the habitat of every creature around me at risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own draft environmental impact statement”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for rescission does not hold up under the agency's own numbers”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “net present value ranging from -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “expanding a road system with a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest