In short: The comment documents that the agency's Draft EIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition rates and economic net benefits, and that the agency has failed to justify how the rescission of the 2001 Roadless Rule reconciles with its own findings on wildlife harm and legal authority under the Organic Act and MUSYA.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “watch fish, deer, migrating birds, and other wildlife”
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “roads can alter deer migration routes”
- “preserving old-growth winter shelter”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “parks and natural areas I visit are already under strain”
- “hikers are injured, campers feel unsafe”
- “recreation losses estimated at $6.1 million annually”
- “natural spaces that restore my physical and mental health”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “fire-density data that undermines the proposal's stated reasoning”
- “agency relies on fuels management as part of its rationale”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “challenge to the legal authority underlying the 2001 Rule”
- “prior federal appellate findings that the rule fell within authority”
- “state-by-state approaches can replace a national rule”
- “significant legal challenges”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal