In short: The comment documents that the agency's draft environmental impact statement contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition risks (DEIS Table 21), sediment impacts on water quality, and negative net economic benefits, while failing to identify specific administrative burdens not already addressed by existing regulatory exceptions in 36 C.F.R. Section 294.12.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “get away from roads, away from the noise and hecticness of the city”
- “immerse myself in the fresh air and beauty of these wild lands”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “roads can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “affect the watersheds that are the source of drinking water”
- “1,034 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “rare native California species of plants and animals that could never be replaced if lost”
- “A logged stand grows back. A road does not.”
- “My 10-year-old daughter deserves to live on an Earth that has sustainable resources and wildlands”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The Forest Service held more than 600 public meetings and took 1.6 million comments to write this rule. It has held none to undo it.”
- “Why have you held no public meetings to see what the citizens of this country think”
- “conduct full public process and substantively address each of these points”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest