In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition rates on roaded versus unroaded lands (Table 21), lacks quantitative projections for sediment delivery to downstream municipal intakes despite acknowledging high erosion potential from timber activities, and fails to address the legal deficiencies of the prior state-by-state replacement strategy identified by the Ninth Circuit.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “watched river otters, black bears, moose, and bald eagles in country that holds its wildness”
- “increased contact and conflict that come with open roads in grizzly habitat can ultimately end in grizzly mortality”
- “moose are drawn to road corridors for road salt, which increases human-moose interactions and conflict”
- “verified species include grizzly bear, elk, wolverine, and bighorn sheep”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “skid roads, trails, log landings and similar disturbances within timber sale areas are the main cause of soil erosion”
- “can contribute up to 90 percent of the sediment generated by timber sale activity”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the more than 7,000 municipal intakes downstream”
- “I work on a river. I understand that what enters the watershed above me arrives below me”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “A human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands than on essentially unroaded lands”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS Table 21”
- “reports far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Ninth Circuit found the prior attempt to substitute local discretion for the national rule legally deficient”
- “confront its own prior finding that incremental local decision-making erodes nationally significant roadless values over time”
- “rejected the rule's 'inflexible one-size-fits-all' nationwide rulemaking approach”
- “ask the agency to answer the specific questions this record demands”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest