In short: The comment documents the specific ecological and recreational values of North Lake in Inyo National Forest, cites the agency's own record and court rulings to identify gaps in the proposal's legal and economic analysis, and requests that the agency address reliance interests and small entity impacts on the record.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “follow simple trails there to connect to nature”
- “unique photographs that you cannot find elsewhere”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “maintain large areas of undisturbed land”
- “preserve the complex ecosystems that sustain life”
- “biodiversity of plants and the multiple ecosystems upon which we depend are protected”
- “encounter with a beaver family constructing a dam”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The agency's own record contradicts this directly”
- “explain how this proposal avoids the deficiencies the Ninth Circuit identified”
- “The agency must not proceed as though that holding does not exist”
- “The agency should withdraw the certification and assess the impact on the small entities”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “importance to clean air, clean water”
- “1,034 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “providing ecosystems to sustain all life on this planet”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapRequest