In short: The comment documents the specific ecological and economic deficiencies in the agency's analysis by citing DEIS data on species impacts and local economic contributions, while challenging the agency's timber supply justification with historical harvest data and requesting the adoption of the No Action alternative.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Protecting wildlife is important to me”
- “adversely affect 327 threatened and endangered species”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13-75%”
- “need large expanses of unfragmented habitat to survive”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “recreate in the White Mountain National Forest”
- “find solace and a way to recreate and recharge”
- “outdoor recreation and enjoyment contributed $4.2 billion”
- “experience its beauty and solitude”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “Logging will not offset the long-term economic losses”
- “timber harvest within potentially affected IRAs has averaged only about 500 acres per year”
- “trivial historical harvest level undercuts the claim”
- “supported over 33,000 jobs”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “retain full Roadless Rule protections”
- “deeply value the unfragmented landscape”
- “protect 16 distinct ecosystems”
- “contribute to the biodiversity of the White Mountain National Forest”
What it names
- National Forests
- White Mountain National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Carr MountainCherry MountainDartmouth RangeKinsman MountainMt. Wolf - Gordon PondSandwich RangeWhite MountainWild River
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative