In short: The comment documents that the agency's economic analysis relies on national averages rather than local impacts, fails to quantify the increased wildfire risk from new roads despite its own data showing higher ignition density near roads, and improperly excludes foreseeable plan amendments from the scope of the rulemaking while soliciting comment on them.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “shelter black bear, hellbender, brook trout, Indiana bat, northern long-eared bat, and Virginia spiraea”
- “more tree species grow than in all of northern Europe”
- “we love being in nature and seeing the wildlife”
- “destroying nature for no reason”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “Opening roadless areas to new road construction would... move ignition rates sharply in the wrong direction”
- “minimize these forest fires”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency cannot simultaneously declare plan amendments out of scope and ask the public to comment on them”
- “The Forest Service took more than 600 public meetings and 1.6 million comments to write the rule it now proposes to undo with none”
- “The agency must analyze the foreseeable plan-amendment scenario... rather than walling it off”
- “I ask that the agency withdraw the certification and assess the impact on the small entities”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “books lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “The agency is already $6.9 billion behind on maintaining the roads it has”
- “being irresponsible with money that could go to a better cause”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest