In short: The comment places on the record specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding wildfire ignition data (DEIS Table 21), financial feasibility (maintenance backlog vs. budget), and legal authority (Tenth Circuit holding on Organic Act/MUSYA), while identifying specific roadless areas in the Bighorn, Custer, and Gallatin National Forests and requesting reconciliation of the proposal with the agency's own prior findings and data.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Spending time in nature is my way to appreciate God's good work”
- “I hike and camp with family and loved ones”
- “These are the places my child deserves to know”
- “They deserve to appreciate them in the way you only can from the saddle of a horse, or the satisfaction after a long hike”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “A human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands than on essentially unroaded lands”
- “The agency's own data says roads make their work more dangerous and more frequent”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in DEIS Table 21”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “sheltering grizzly bear, Yellowstone cutthroat trout, wolverine, elk, and bighorn sheep”
- “The ecosystems these roadless areas support are critical, not only to wildlife but to us human animals”
- “local decision-making can incrementally erode nationally significant roadless values”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “325 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Clean fresh water is the direct source of life for towns”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal