In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS and draft biological assessment identify specific adverse impacts on bird abundance, biodiversity, elk populations, water quality, and carbon storage, as well as likely adverse effects on 327 ESA-listed species, but fail to provide population-level projections, carbon quantification, or mitigation strategies for the 40.1 million acres of affected roadless areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure”
- “adversely affect some ESA-listed species”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “roads carry sediment”
- “municipal water intakes sit in watersheds”
- “Keep our watersheds clean”
- “impaired streams”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “stored forest carbon in the coterminous United States”
- “quantify the change in carbon storage”
- “hold carbon”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike to be outside in nature”
- “It is good for the soul”
- “stop developing every inch of the forest so our kids can know it”
What it names
- Works cited
- Kroeger et al. 2022
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal