In short: The comment establishes that the agency's DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis fail to project population-level effects on birds and big game, quantify carbon storage changes, or reconcile the $6.9 billion road maintenance backlog with the proposed rescission, specifically regarding named roadless areas in Wisconsin, Michigan, and Indiana.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “I watch for birds, including migrating birds, and other wildlife”
- “Bird richness declines with road presence in forested habitat”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure and decreased when the gates were removed”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “Carbon storage is acknowledged and then effectively ignored”
- “inventoried roadless areas contain about 5 percent of the stored forest carbon”
- “quantify the change in carbon storage and sequestration under each alternative”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Wisconsin's roadless watersheds also supply drinking water to communities”
- “286 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “expanding the road network puts both ecological integrity and water supply at risk”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The record the agency assembled does not support rescission on economic grounds”
- “net present value spanning negative $92 million to positive $199 million”
- “expanding a road system that already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog is fiscally responsible”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest