In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition rates on roaded versus unroaded lands, wildlife survival dependencies on roadless habitat, and economic net benefits, while citing a Tenth Circuit ruling that upheld the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule, thereby establishing a basis for requesting the withdrawal of the proposed rescission.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Elk, deer and bear can be found there all year long, and it should be protected at all costs”
- “elk avoid areas near roads and select unroaded habitat for summer cover and forage”
- “roads built for resource extraction may have altered mule deer migration routes”
- “increased contact and conflict that come with open roads can ultimately end in grizzly mortality”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “part of the headwaters of the Colorado River, which supplies water to 40 million people”
- “325 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Roads increase sedimentation and degrade those watersheds”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I run day trips across some of Colorado's most technical 14ers”
- “photograph action sports, including skiing, climbing, biking and running”
- “provides a little respite from the noise and bustle of I-70”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “A federal court of appeals considered that exact argument and held otherwise”
- “The Tenth Circuit's ruling was unambiguous”
- “The agency should state plainly what legal basis it now believes supports a contrary position”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest