In short: The comment documents that the draft EIS acknowledges adverse impacts on 327 threatened and endangered species, water quality degradation from road construction, and increased wildfire risk from road density, while the commenter cites external data showing that 78% of human-caused fires start near roads and that roadless areas protect critical watersheds, thereby establishing a record of specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis of these impacts.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “critical habitat for a multitude of species including California and Northern Spotted Owls, fisher, salmon”
- “adversely affect 327 threatened and endangered species and 71 designated critical habitats”
- “important habitat for native trout, salmon, and elk”
- “crucial areas for wide-ranging carnivores like wolverines”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Communities depend on our National Forests for clean, fresh drinking water”
- “Inventoried Roadless Areas (IRA) protect over 130,000 km of streams and rivers”
- “Road construction and native surface forest roads are the largest source of sediment related to timber harvest operations”
- “ensure that communities continue to have clean safe drinking water”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Rescinding the Roadless Rule will increase the risk of wildfire”
- “78% of human-caused fires on National Forests start within ½ mile of a road”
- “Road density is linked to human-caused wildfires, and as the density of roads increases so does the probability, number, and frequency of wildfire ignitions”
- “the 2001 Roadless Rule allows for forest management activities, including timber harvest, to reduce the risk of uncharacteristic wildfire”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Backpacking in California in remote roadless areas... were formative experiences”
- “thrilled by the roadless areas here including the Rubicon and the American River Roadless areas”
- “high demand hunting and fishing areas”
- “favored by anglers and hunters”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest