In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposed rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule fails to reconcile its own cost-benefit data regarding marginal timber gains against significant recreation losses, maintenance backlogs, documented declines in bird abundance, and increased human-caused fire risks in the Arroyo Seco roadless area.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “take my children and sisters to marvel at the outdoors”
- “net negative to the quality of life for people in this urban area”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “bird richness declines with road presence in forested habitat”
- “road-noise experiments in a roadless area cut bird abundance by over a quarter”
- “31 percent of species avoiding the noise entirely”
- “documented biological cost”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent”
- “Forest Service carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “net present value spanning negative $92 million to positive $199 million”
- “livelihoods depend on the character of these landscapes”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “building roads into the Arroyo Seco... carries a calculable human-caused fire risk”
- “wildfire is already the defining land-management challenge”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest