In short: The comment documents that the rescission of the 2001 Roadless Rule would exacerbate bird population declines and habitat fragmentation, citing specific data from the DEIS and external studies to support the request to maintain the rule via Alternative 1.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “concerned about what effect rescinding the Roadless Rule will have on our bird populations”
- “birds that depend on intact roadless areas”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity”
- “bird richness declines with road presence in forested habitat”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “keep the Roadless Rule completely intact”
- “High quality habitat and conservation are essential”
- “industrial timber management... disrupted the mosaic of large old-growth areas”
- “We need more forests and wild areas, not less”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “2019 study... reported that bird populations had plummeted by 70%”
- “2025 State of the Birds Report... revealed that bird populations... have continued to experience consistent, steep declines”
- “DEIS cites the finding that habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “road-noise experiments in a roadless area cut bird abundance by over a quarter”
What it names
- Works cited
- Haddad et al. 2015Kroeger et al. 2022
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative